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Better Than 1

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:30 pm

Im told that 2 heads are better than 1
Then, does that mean 3 are better than 2?
Youve got 2 eyes, 2 ears, dont be so blue.
Its mouth, nose, and heart that you have as 1.

If you had 2 heads, would you be smarter?
Would your mind contain ideas so much,
Thats its chaos, all cluster in a bunch?
4 lungs, 2 hearts, then would you live longer?

Its impossible to tell that which you
Shall never have nor shall you ever know,
Weve all the same number, so dont be low.
Ive said it several times now, get a clue.

1,2 theyre numbers, thats all that they are
Quality, not quantity, will you dare?

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Please tell me what you think. Thanks! Very Happy

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Re: Better Than 1

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:53 pm

Interesting poem. ABBA. That's unusaual. Anyways, good poem. Very Happy

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Re: Better Than 1

Post by Moonlite Knight on Sun Aug 03, 2008 7:35 pm

Thanks! I was experimenting with a new way to write a poem when I wrote that Happy

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Re: Better Than 1

Post by xStarr_x3 on Sun Aug 03, 2008 8:52 pm

That's good! I love the last line, as it's true in my opinion.

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Re: Better Than 1

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:24 am

Thank you! I think its true as well Happy

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