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Post by laxboy36 on Mon Apr 21, 2008 11:54 pm

There once was a man named Jeffery Halls. His dream was to become a god. He tried to do many heroic things to appoint him as a god, but he never caught the attention of the gods. At this point in time the gods were going through a crisis. Hades had killed Zeus and was taking over the world. Timilies the god of time was supposed to go back in time and stop Hades, but Hades had also killed him. One day the remaining gods found a theory of how to go back in time. It was to reverse the rotation of the earth causing them to go back in time. So the gods set out to find a man capable of reversing the rotation of the earth. Eventually they found a man named Jeffery Halls who agreed to complete this task if he could become a god. The gods talked it over and agreed to the conditions. So around the world Jeffery went running as fast as he could until he finally reversed time! Once the gods were into the past they all stopped Hades from killing Zeus and then locked up Hades. Once this was all over Jeffery sped up the rotation of the earth putting them back into present day, time. After this was over Jeffery became the new god of time.
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Post by jeberexa on Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:18 pm

Great story! Smile It has a nice plot.

It should have gone under the Drabbles Section, though.
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Post by ross007@comcast.net on Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:36 am

i agree, it was awesome though
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Post by Hazel on Sat May 03, 2008 2:10 am

This was a good story! Very Happy
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