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Post by jeberexa on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:17 pm

Here's the next one. Very Happy

Nature’s Mountain’s
All around, towering above,
Higher than the highest bird:
What many people dream of.

Very few creatures,
Live quite this high.
A lonely bear or mountain goat,
Live where land touches sky.

An icy wind can flutter
Through the mountain trees,
But for some this lonely place,
Makes them feel quite at ease.

Some mountains are destinations,
For many a traveling tourist.
As the drive up the mountain,
The road shrouded in mist.

Nature’s Mountain’s
All around, towering above,
Higher than the highest bird:
What many people dream of.


Last edited by jeberexa on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:18 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I goofed up the spacing.)
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Post by 017350 on Fri May 09, 2008 5:02 pm

Nice. This one could make it in the book. Perhaps.

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Post by jeberexa on Fri May 09, 2008 9:38 pm

As you may have seen, I have removed my name from the list. I changed my mind. No using my poems, please. Anyway, Nature's Arctic and Music is much, much better.
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Post by 017350 on Fri May 09, 2008 10:52 pm

Okay. Sure. I'll take your name off right away.

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Post by BPahl88 on Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:22 pm

Oh... awsome poem. Very Happy I just think that some of the wording wasn't right, but other than that, great. Very Happy
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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:16 am

Wow, really good! I loved the way you began it!

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