The Love And Friendship Antisocial

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The Love And Friendship Antisocial

Post by Sofie on Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:11 pm

I kinda like that name. It's self-explainatory, really.


The Love And Friendship Antisocial
by Seth Wreckage

Friendship is just another drug,
Another strong addicton.
Remove loneliness with a hug,
Replace it with restriction.

Love is just another prison,
Changing all your ways,
Blinding you from thought and reason,
Shortening your days.

The songs are pretty, that may be,
The stories rather sweet,
But I still hope that love and me
Will never, ever meet.





View it as a different angle! We all need variation in our lives. Try looking at it from this side a little. Scary? Perhaps.
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Re: The Love And Friendship Antisocial

Post by BlackOpal on Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:23 pm

Awesome. Very Happy
It is interesting to look at this from a different angle. Friendships are extremely selfish sometimes. People would rather have a friend listen to them than listen to a friend.
Great, as always.
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Re: The Love And Friendship Antisocial

Post by Moonlite Knight on Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:08 am

Wow, that was really interesting, I like it. I agree with BlackOpal. Great poem! Smile

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Re: The Love And Friendship Antisocial

Post by Hazel on Thu Apr 24, 2008 5:35 am

I never really thought about friendship that way, but in that light I suppose that can be very true! Smile
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Re: The Love And Friendship Antisocial

Post by 017350 on Fri May 09, 2008 5:06 pm

Yes, I like this one. It's the best of all your poems.
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Re: The Love And Friendship Antisocial

Post by Sofie on Sat May 10, 2008 2:45 pm

Thank you, guys!^^
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