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Secrets

Post by Hazel on Thu Apr 10, 2008 11:35 pm

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Last edited by Hazel on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:57 am; edited 2 times in total
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Re: Secrets

Post by BlackOpal on Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:04 am

I like this one. Very Happy
The last verse was very good.
They rhyming scheme was somewhat irregular. But that's okay, it's better than I can do. Very Happy
Rock on.
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Re: Secrets

Post by Moonlite Knight on Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:56 am

Yup, I agree with BlackOpal, the last verse was the best. Out of all your poems so far, I like this one the best. I know I already replied to this poem on DoT, but I'm doing it again, just for fun Smile and because I'm bored.

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Re: Secrets

Post by Topaz on Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:03 pm

Secrets is the best poem i,ve ever read before!!!!
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Re: Secrets

Post by Hazel on Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:47 pm

Thanks Topaz... Very Happy Very Happy
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