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In a Blink of Your Eye

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:20 am

In a blink of your eye, Iím all grown up
Iíve learned so much and grown a little tall.
Everything Iíve seen could fill your blue cup,
I became cocky, thinking I knew all.

One blink more, Iím no longer yours anymore.
Iíve run ahead, while you stay behind me.
Everything you say leaves me pretty sore.
To me it was just ĎIí and never Ďweí.

One more blink and time has gone by so fast,
Youíve gone from my life leaving me alone,
Wishing so hard that those moments last
In my mind like the scent of your cologne.

In a blink of your eye, future is past,
No matter what I did, it did not last.
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Ok, this is my last poem for today.
Please tell me what you thought of it.
Thank you! Smile


Last edited by Moonlite Knight on Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:23 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: In a Blink of Your Eye

Post by Hazel on Thu Apr 10, 2008 5:29 am

This is so true. I really like it, it's so sad. A good peom can evoke emotion. Very Happy
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