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Eternity

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:11 am

I look at him.
He looks at me.
We look at each
other for all
eternity.
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I am fixated on peom's at the moment which is why I am writing a lot of them.
Anyway, please tell me what you think. Thank you Smile
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Re: Eternity

Post by Hazel on Thu Apr 10, 2008 5:30 am

Even though this is short it says a lot. Very Happy
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Re: Eternity

Post by Sofie on Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:32 pm

I like this. It's creepy. It's short. It can mean all sorts of things. ^^
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Re: Eternity

Post by sweetkiss on Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:07 am

I like it, I agree with Hazel Very Happy
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