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Post by Holleh on Mon May 30, 2011 2:48 am

Ahaha. Okay, so I had to write lyrics for a music video for geometry... And though I haven't done the music video and probably won't, seeing as it's due Tuesday... Yeah. xP But I have the lyrics, anyway. They were written to the "Guinevere" rap by MC Lars and YTCracker. If you haven't heard it, look it up, and you'll see how the beat of the song is supposed to go. ENJOY.

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They call me Circle,
Ruler of polygons
I'm a plane figure
Got a team of pi
Got a chord named diameter
Legendary perimeter
Everyone knows I'm the
Round figure manager
Lordship, had an apprenticeship
With a shape named Triangle
She's a little acute, but I fear
My main shape, Cube,
He's great at math
He might teach her
Behind my back
Don't want to rush to equations
But when he's around it's a little confusing
Can't tell if she's learning from me
Or sneaking behind my back

Chorus:
I love math
I love math too
The square root of four is two
Circle got played
I feel betrayed
From dark-ages to textbook days

Circle, yeah, I met him at school
Seemed real smart, but he wasn't
Said he'd teach me like a queen
Give me all the skills I need
But he taught me nothing
You may have a math award
But up in the classroom, you're looking kind of bored
So I hit up my PC, online, to find a new tutor to be mine

The name's Cube or Box
I solve problems a lot
On my way to class from the parking lot
Home girl, hit me up, click, send

Want a smart triangle student?

So hey Triangle, come and learn with me
The smartest thing you ever did was not to cheat
You learn honestly
I cross-canceled that fraction like three and fifteen, oh!

(repeat chorus)

Math lessons from tutor Box
We learned geometry; just couldn't stop
We learned things you cannot learn on cable
Even reviewed the multiplication table

Times never change in the geometry class
In the future, will shapes have the same problems?
How will they cope and how will they solve them?
Put my face in the textbook, learn the signs
All throughout math, then that test will be mine
Learning, yeah, that's the ticket
I never thought math could be so wicked

(repeat chorus)

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Yeah. xP I know the flow is off at some points because I shortened the verses a bit due to 1.) Not being able to come up with anything school-appropriate and 2.) It was late at night when I wrote the majority of this and I was just trying to hurry and get this done. But. Yeah. Thaaat's it.


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Post by Hazel on Mon May 30, 2011 3:07 am

Well I think it's excellent! I thought it was pretty entertaining as well. I liked it.

In the first paragraph thingy, you put "he might teacher her" was that supposed to be "teach?"

Otherwise everything sounded good to me XD

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Post by Holleh on Mon May 30, 2011 3:08 am

Oh, haha, yes, I meant teach. xP Thanks for pointing that out.
And thank you! ^^
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