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Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:35 am


_______________Please find me
_______________________when I close my eyes.

______________Because tonight I'm going to take a
___________________________________________________f
_____________________________________________________a
___________________________________________________l
____________________________________________________l

____________________________I'm going to take a
________________________________________________P
________________________________________________L
________________________________________________U
________________________________________________N
________________________________________________G
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____________________________________________________into the black of my mind.

____________________________________________________________It's do or die!

_____________What happens when I sleep
____________________________affects my waking.

____________________________________________________So which is the dream?
___________________________________________________________And which is the reality?

_____________________God help me if I know.


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Subject: Dreams
Title: Am I Awake Or Dreaming?
Sometimes I can't decide if a dream has actually happened or not. Sometimes I can't figure out if I'm awake or not.

Again, sorry about the white lines.

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She's PREGNANT. With a cow. How..?!
Holleh speaks to herself. In dreams.
HOLLEHS: Now come tree-size!
Holleh talks hotter than the sun. ;o
Holleh is an IN-SPURR-AY-SHUN. Believe it.
She thinks an artichoke is a type of fish.
She also gives lap-dances. To beds.
Holleh can van like a man.

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Re: am i awake or dreaming? **

Post by Holleh on Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:38 am

I like it, except the lines
"What happens when I sleep
Affects my waking."
It doesn't really sound worded right to me, but otherwise, iss good. :3

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Re: am i awake or dreaming? **

Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:41 am

I could eyedrop the colour to make the lines go away, buuuttt... /flails- I'm so lazy.

Eh. If you have any suggestions for that line, be my guest. xP

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Holleh likes taking evil slumbers. (and stealing candy from babies.)
She's PREGNANT. With a cow. How..?!
Holleh speaks to herself. In dreams.
HOLLEHS: Now come tree-size!
Holleh talks hotter than the sun. ;o
Holleh is an IN-SPURR-AY-SHUN. Believe it.
She thinks an artichoke is a type of fish.
She also gives lap-dances. To beds.
Holleh can van like a man.

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