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Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:34 am

My skin is dirty--


Under my fingernails,
Ground into my skin...


No amount of scrubbing will make it go away.


It clings to my hair,
Crawls into my mouth...


I can't stop it.


It reaches into my brain,
Sticks its fingers in...


Claims my innocence!


I've been dirtied--
But was I ever clean?


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TITLE: I'm Unclean
SUBJECT: Innocence
My innocence was ripped from me when I was younger.

Day two of the thirty day challenge.

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Post by Hazel on Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:46 am

This sounds so gross and then you say innocent and you're all like, Oh! Haha.
I like it, simple and different topic, especially a different way of presenting it was well.

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Post by xStarr_x3 on Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:44 am

Ahaha, well! Most people are like, "You're so dirty. ;-;" And that 'dirty' mental attitude usually comes from losing your innocence.
...I just took it a bit more figuratively. xD
Thank youu!

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She's PREGNANT. With a cow. How..?!
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She thinks an artichoke is a type of fish.
She also gives lap-dances. To beds.
Holleh can van like a man.
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