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Spider, Spider

Post by Holleh on Sat Jan 22, 2011 5:21 am

Okay, before you read any further... I wrote this when I was eight. xD So yes, it sucks. It was an assignment for school, and it had to be about a bug, so I chose a spider, even though I've always been afraid of them. This is actually published in the Anthology of Poetry by Young Americans: 2005 Edition. So no stealing, though I don't think you'd want to steal this poem. xP Just saying.
(Note: I am adding the missing punctuation my eight-year-old self left out.)

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Spider, spider, what a glider
Can he get any wider?
I see that spider ever day,
And all we do is play and play
My spider friend sticks by my side
When he told me a sad story, I cried and cried
My spider friend and I will stick together to the very end

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You may now laugh at it. xP
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Post by Hazel on Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:09 am

Aww that's so cute Razz

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Post by Holleh on Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:10 am

xD Thank you, Hazel.
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