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she said goodbye to the ground

Post by xStarr_x3 on Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:20 am

She said goodbye
____________to the ground

Telling it that
__________she was going to go
_________________________and live her dreams

She said she'd find them
___________________and hold them tight in her hand

Never to let go

My dreams, she said
_________________my dreams will carry me
________________________________hold me high above

Never to let go

She said goodbye
____________to the ground
_________kissed the lips of it farewell
______stepped over the edge

My dreams, she said
_________________my dreams will carry me

And she'd hold them tight in her hand
_________________________________never to let go

She said goodbye to the ground
___________________________and hello to her dreams






WELL.
Ignore the white lines. >.>
Because WCF is stupid and won't let me use formatting the way I had it before. And I'm too lazy to figure out how to get it where I want without formatting it differently. So there.

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Post by Hazel on Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:27 am

LOVE this. I think mostly because it has a very good meaning. And very nice imagery too. I think this is one of my favorites. Slightly repetitive, but as a poem it just works.

And though this is irrelevant but when I first looked at your title which read "she said goodbye" before I clicked on it and the voice in my head started singing. "Hello hello! I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!!" Haha I know weird, just had to say it.

And I agree WCF has weird formatting. I didn't think the white lines were all that distracting though XD

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Re: she said goodbye to the ground

Post by xStarr_x3 on Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:16 pm

Awhh thank you. c: I do like the meaning behind it. It's a personal one for me. xD

Baha. I SAY HELLOOO~~
I love your mind sometimes.

I was going to eyedrop a colour to get it to match the background, but I was too lazy to do that.

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Holleh talks hotter than the sun. ;o
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She also gives lap-dances. To beds.
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