THIS POEM HAS A PROBLEM WITH YOU.

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THIS POEM HAS A PROBLEM WITH YOU.

Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:44 pm

Go burn like fire!
So the sun will smile?
If that's what it'll require. >.>
I give an inch, you take a mile!


Ugh, I think you're a prick. D<
It's how I'm meant to be. :D
Meh, make me sick.
One day you'll see. =.=;


I'll see? So I'm blind? o-O
You make me want to be dead. ._.;
HAHA! That'd be quite fine. (:
You're sick in the head. D;


So we're back to insults then? .-.
Yep. You're a hen. ^^

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I KNOW FINE AND BLIND DON'T RHYME. sorta. I rhymed the middle 'i' sound in that one. xPP Who cares. It's a silly little poem we had to write for English. Actually, it's a sonnet.
ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
It's two people arguing.. or one person arguing with themselves. Whichever you see. ;D

Also. Some parts were a bit different earlier. I had to rewrite it to match the criteria I needed... and I'm too lazy to change it back.


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Re: THIS POEM HAS A PROBLEM WITH YOU.

Post by Holleh on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:46 pm

IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN NAMED THE POEM.
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