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bitter/sweet

Post by bibbit on Wed Sep 22, 2010 6:37 pm

I was bored and thinking this afternoon.
Bored + thinking = song/poetry writing. :D



I wonder if we could have made it.
I wonder where we would be now,
But all is said and done.
This is not the first time that my wishful thinking has consumed me
To this degree.

I try to push you out of my mind.
I try to make my senses clear,
But I canít help myself.
Just to see you for a moment brings the memories back for months and
I donít understand.

All my life, I never thought Iíd feel like this.
Peace and strife; how love can be so hit and miss.
I would ask for any way out of this,
But chances are
Iíd pass.

Itís a bittersweet feeling to love you this much.
Itís been so, so long since Iíve felt your touch.
What if you had always felt the same way as I?

I wonder if we could have made it...

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Re: bitter/sweet

Post by xStarr_x3 on Wed Sep 22, 2010 9:30 pm

I liked how you ended this with the same thing you began it with.
It does sound like a very bittersweet poem. xD

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