There's Always Something To Say, But Never Anything Worth Saying

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There's Always Something To Say, But Never Anything Worth Saying

Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu May 27, 2010 4:38 am

I can't express myself
Through simple words and actions.
It takes more than a smile,
More than a frown, a tear,
To convey a feeling.
Words are all I have.

But words don't always come
Within the blink of an eye.
Raw emotions and hidden thoughts
Steal away from home
To disappear without a trace.
Impossible to catch,
To hold down and discover.
And there's never enough time
To try and put words to them.

Mouths are always moving,
And words are always flowing.
Empty and meaningless,
Dying as soon as they hit the air,
In a short-lived existence.

There's always something to say,
But never anything worth saying.
Words come and go,
Living and dying.
They exist to be forgotten,
And are forgotten because they existed.

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So my friend and I were conversing. And then the conversation stopped. He said "I feel the need to say something." So I told him to say something. He said he had nothing to say. I countered with there was always something to say. He said that there's nothing worth saying. And then said that it sounded like a song. He said his band would write a song, and I'm like.. well, I'ma incorporate it into a poem somehow. And here it is.
And I have thought of a genre for my poems. Sort-of. They're free-verse, but in my mind I'm starting to refer to them as "word-spew". Since that's a lot of what I do now.


Last edited by xStarr_x3 on Thu May 27, 2010 6:39 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Post by Hazel on Thu May 27, 2010 6:05 am

I liked it. It kinda sounded like it could be the lyrics to a rather sad song Razz

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Re: There's Always Something To Say, But Never Anything Worth Saying

Post by bibbit on Thu May 27, 2010 6:37 pm

Hmm. Very thought-provoking. Me likey.
The only prominent flaw is the spelling. xP

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Re: There's Always Something To Say, But Never Anything Worth Saying

Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu May 27, 2010 6:41 pm

Aha, it might, Hazel.
Dunno how well the ukulele could handle a sad song, though. It sounds too happy.

Spelling? Nazi. .-.
I knew something would come out wrong. I used the downstairs computer instead of mine. xD Spell-check ftw.

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Re: There's Always Something To Say, But Never Anything Worth Saying

Post by bibbit on Thu May 27, 2010 6:52 pm

haha, maybe if you tune it down low enough and play a lot of minor chords. xP
Also, fixeditforyou. Happy

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Re: There's Always Something To Say, But Never Anything Worth Saying

Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu May 27, 2010 7:02 pm

Well, maybe that would work..
Fixedwhat?

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Post by bibbit on Thu May 27, 2010 7:06 pm

The typos, sillay. I couldn't help it, sorry. xD

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