Solitude (song)

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Solitude (song)

Post by bibbit on Sun May 23, 2010 12:36 am

This is a song that I wrote earlier this week, along with accompanying music which has not been recorded to my computer yet, else I would probably post a track of it just for the heck of it. but ANYWAYS. I just kind of thought about myself and my life for a little while and wrote down my thoughts on a torn out sheet of binder paper, with a twist of abstract artistic flavor to it, and this is what I came up with. I don't mean to say it's anything great, but it's the best of what I've written so far (in my opinion) and I'm proud of it. You can actually get a nice taste of my personality from it.
Also this is the first piece of writing that I have posted to this site, so.. yeah. Hope you guys like it!

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I value privacy, and that's why I sleep
On the highest floor;
Because lately I've heard the strangest sounds
Outside my door.
I want to get away from the everyday
Taking in the view,
Because I'm sick of waving life goodbye
As it passes through.

But I'd rather stay, 'cause I'm too afraid
To get into the game.
I'd rather stay here in a place
Where no one knows my name;
Where no one knows my name.

I'm moving to the ocean front because
I need some room to breathe--
But can you blame me?

I wish that I could be not so lonely
But still be alone,
Because solitude is the mold to which
My mind has grown.
I want to call my shots, turn the lines and dots
Into sentences,
Because I don't want to die not knowing
What life is.

Now I'll say goodbye to the lovely lie
That led me on and buried me so deep.
Whispers in the wind call to me again,
and maybe this time, I won't be asleep.

--

I would be happy to explain any part of it upon request, but I doubt it'll be necessary.

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Re: Solitude (song)

Post by Holleh on Sun May 23, 2010 12:44 am

Whoa. I loved it. ^^ Sorry, I'm not much of a critic... xD
Dot reference = <3

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Post by bibbit on Sun May 23, 2010 12:46 am

ahaha, well thank you. and I was so thinking of you when I wrote that line. xD

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