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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:48 pm

Before you were even thought of, my child,
I was growing.

Before you even opened your eyes, me child,
I watched the sun.

Before you even uttered a word, my child,
I conversed with the wind.

Before you even took a step, my child,
I was rooted for life.

Before you even mastered your letters, my child.
I sang the song of life.

Before you even began to form ideas, my child,
I taught my offspring to blossom.

Before you even grew up, my child,
I was centuries old.

And,

Before you even cut me down, my child,
I was dead.

You killed me my child,
When you never learned to care.

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Please take 5 minutes out of the 1440 that make up your day and recycle.
Save the trees.

Critique welcomed!

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Post by Hazel on Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:56 pm

That was creative! I liked the tree referring to people, my child! It really made it seem old and wise. But it was sad, poor tree, though it does happen.

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:09 pm

Thank you! ^^

Yes, that does happen unfortunately, since we all depend on wood a lot. The least we could do though, is recycle.

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