Doubt
Doubt
by Moonlite Knight on Wed May 28, 2008 5:21 pm
I dream
In the shadows.
I hide
In the light.
I grow
In the darkness.
I die
Instead of fight.
I’m so many things,
Yet nothing at all.
Unless you keep heart,
I shall never fall.
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I wrote this poem while taking a break from Math homewrok. Please tell me what yo uthink, thanks!
In the shadows.
I hide
In the light.
I grow
In the darkness.
I die
Instead of fight.
I’m so many things,
Yet nothing at all.
Unless you keep heart,
I shall never fall.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I wrote this poem while taking a break from Math homewrok. Please tell me what yo uthink, thanks!
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Re: Doubt
by Hazel on Wed May 28, 2008 6:13 pm
Ohh this is really good! And super true! 
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Re: Doubt
by BlackOpal on Thu May 29, 2008 3:19 am
Ooh, great job!
I really like it.
I LOVE the first two lines.
Fantastic.
I really like it.
I LOVE the first two lines.
Fantastic.
I'll review if you review me.
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Re: Doubt
by BPahl88 on Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:57 pm
Very well writen! This is one of those poems that is short, but has a lot of meaning to it.
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Some say the glass is half empty, Some say the glass is half full, I say "Are you gonna drink that?"
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Some say the glass is half empty, Some say the glass is half full, I say "Are you gonna drink that?"
Crazy is a relative term in my family!
JOIN THE KINGDOM OF DARKNESS! (We have cookies and doughnuts.)
*Sigh* If it were only my sister. ...In a city, in a country, in a contanent, on a planet. Sheesh. Be more specific.
