Dreams
Dreams
by Hazel on Fri May 16, 2008 2:52 pm
Of course we all dream
It's just something we do
but why does it seem
that we really need too?
They're thoughts in our heads
that want to be heard
they never lie dead
but fly like a bird
They're our hopes and desires
pushing out of the dark
spinning around like tires
but the car never parks
They're emotions inside
that want to be free
They don't want to hide
they're there to see
Don't try to supress them
because then it'll seem
you'll be sorry you missed them
those beautiful dreams
It's just something we do
but why does it seem
that we really need too?
They're thoughts in our heads
that want to be heard
they never lie dead
but fly like a bird
They're our hopes and desires
pushing out of the dark
spinning around like tires
but the car never parks
They're emotions inside
that want to be free
They don't want to hide
they're there to see
Don't try to supress them
because then it'll seem
you'll be sorry you missed them
those beautiful dreams
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Re: Dreams
by Moonlite Knight on Fri May 16, 2008 3:18 pm
I agree, that was a really good poem. The first verse was the best, in my opinion. Good job!
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Re: Dreams
by BPahl88 on Tue Aug 05, 2008 8:06 pm
Great poem. And I actually liked the first and the last stanzas the best. 
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Some say the glass is half empty, Some say the glass is half full, I say "Are you gonna drink that?"
Crazy is a relative term in my family!
JOIN THE KINGDOM OF DARKNESS! (We have cookies and doughnuts.)
*Sigh* If it were only my sister. ...In a city, in a country, in a contanent, on a planet. Sheesh. Be more specific.
Re: Dreams
by xStarr_x3 Yesterday at 9:47 am
That was amazing.
It fits what a dream is almost exactly, in my opinion.
It fits what a dream is almost exactly, in my opinion.
