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Post by Hazel on Fri May 16, 2008 2:56 pm

I'll take this pink one
amd this pretty blue
then when I'm done
you can use them too

I use creativity
and make something nice
It's a worthwhile activity
so take my advice

Let your thoughts run free
in a torrent of colors
and then you will see
imagination stirs

I'll draw something funny
or something real sweet
like a little bunny
or a bird that goes "tweet"

But whatever I make
wonderful it will be
and much time it will take
just my crayons and me
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Post by BlackOpal on Fri May 16, 2008 3:09 pm

Cute.
I like the first two versus the best.

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Post by jeberexa on Fri May 16, 2008 3:14 pm

Nice poem, Hazel. I really like the subject. It's something you don't think about everyday.

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri May 16, 2008 3:19 pm

That was really cute! I liked it, espically the first two verses. Good job! Very Happy
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Post by Sofie on Mon May 19, 2008 5:13 am

Cute^^ I agree with Opal, the first verses are best, but the rest is cute as well Smile

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Post by BPahl88 on Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:02 am

Haha. Nice poem Hazel. I agree, that isn't something you think of everyday. (I feel a tug to go draw something with crayons now. Happy)
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Re: Crayons

Post by Hazel on Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:16 am

Haha thanks everyone. And wahahaha BP Very Happy
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