The Review Game

[BlackOpal]

I thought that this game was fitting for the forum.
In this game one person posts a story/poem that that wanted reviewed. The next poster reviews that poem and gives the name of a story/poem of theirs that they want reviewed.
Okay, for example:

Poster One: I'd like a review of my story story number one.

Poster Two: I reviewed that story, and could somebody review my poem poem number one.

Poster Three: I reviewed your poem, and I was wondering if someone could review my story story number two.

And, well, you get the idea.
You can give a couple options of stories and poems for the next poster to review, if you wish.

Concrit is encouraged. Try to find at least one thing wrong with everything you review. This game should build writers.
But compliments work too.

Next person to post gets a free review, without having to review anyone else.

[Moonlite Knight]

Hi! Would anyone please review my story,The Mysteries of Love, Time & Fortune Cookies? Thanks!

Yay! I get a free reveiw

[BlackOpal]

I reviewed it.
I'd love a review on my unfinished Dark is Rising Fanfiction.
But if you haven't read DiR then just any poem.

[Moonlite Knight]

Ok, I reviewed your Fanfiction, becuase it didn't seem like anyone else was going to. I waited a whole day, but no one continued this game. Kidding.
I would love it if someone reviews my poem Better Than 1
Thanks!

[jeberexa]

Okay, I reviewed your poem. It was awesome! I really couldn't find anything wrong with it, so I just made something up.

It’s impossible to tell that which you
Shall never have nor shall you ever know,

Even though sometimes rhyming is hard, that line sounded to elegant for the rest of the poem. I'm not saying that in a bad way, it's just some poems are wittier and just more light-headed while others are deeper.

Could someone review my fanfic "The Search?"

[BlackOpal]

I reviewed it.
I'd like a review on my DiR fanfiction again.
Either that or my poem Holy War.
Or my drabble, Peonies.
Or my fanfiction Passing Afternoon.
Whatever floats your boat.

[jeberexa]

Great! I like it.

I've always liked poems that question things like that.

Could somebody please (this isn't a review) but I think my game Lymericks just passed through a wave of new games. Anybody care to play it?

[Moonlite Knight]

I tried to wirte a lymerick and posted it. It probably isn't that good but I tried I'll think up another one, and post that too.

Can someone people review any of my fanifcs or poems? It doesn't really matter which one, any is fine. Thanks!